Getting ready for AM again

Even though I had originally planned to do three shots this break, I figured I'd only get two done. But in the past couple of weeks I thought it would be a fun excercise to go through some of my older shots and see if I could fixed them.

Well this didn't work out the way had hoped, but I was able to to take a small piece of and older shot and use it as a starting point.

Below is what I'm calling my third test shot. With this shot I'm concentrating on my poses and timing. I still plan and go back and do several straight ahead passes but I'm pretty happy with hoe it's coming along.

As always all feedback is welcomed.